Below is the feedback from my first crit, written by my group. The main things I've picked up from this weeks crit is that my briefs need to be more direct and focused, I need to scale down the amount I aim to produce and make sure my work ties in with my proposed rationale. I think, as a designer I'm confused as to which area I fit into, I'm unsure how people view my work and I need to figure out what sort of consistent practice I want my work to fit into.
